Descriptive Piece Winter

For writing this week we had to do a descriptive piece using a photo so here is my writing and the photo we were doing our descriptive piece on.

The fire is burning bright keeping the whole house warm. The Man is sitting on his chair reading a nice book. While other kids are playing with the snow and going snowboarding. The trees are whistling with the snow. The noise of the wind blowing blocks out all other noises. The clouds block out all of the sun. The snow is so big that you go down to your hips when in the snow like getting in a pool. The snowflakes are sparkling. 

and here is the picture