Friday, 17 August 2018

Liam O Descriptive Writing

For writing this week we have been working on using descriptive writing to interest our readers, Mrs Clark gave us this picture and instructions to make it more interesting for our reader and then we used these words to make a story for this photo. After we had written the story we then self assessed and looked at the descriptive words we used. I really liked this activity because it made me better at spelling! Next time I would like to include more writing and have a word on every box on the 4-5 table.


WALT:  Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers

Adjectives
Nouns
Verbs
Adverbs
Broken
Beach
Crashing
Loudly
Destroyed
Ship
Cloudy
Ear piercing
Abandoned
Wood
Waves
Sitting
sinking


Aboundound

This is a abandoned ship its broken a better word is destroyed its sitting and sinking the the waves are blowing its cloudy and crashing and the sound its making when its crashing its ear piercing.

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