Liam O Descriptive Writing

For writing this week we have been working on using descriptive writing to interest our readers, Mrs Clark gave us this picture and instructions to make it more interesting for our reader and then we used these words to make a story for this photo. After we had written the story we then self assessed and looked at the descriptive words we used. I really liked this activity because it made me better at spelling! Next time I would like to include more writing and have a word on every box on the 4-5 table.

WALT:  Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers

Adjectives	Nouns	Verbs	Adverbs
Broken	Beach	Crashing	Loudly
Destroyed	Ship	Cloudy	Ear piercing
Abandoned	Wood	Waves	Sitting
sinking			Aboundound

This is a abandoned ship its broken a better word is destroyed its sitting and sinking the the waves are blowing its cloudy and crashing and the sound its making when its crashing its ear piercing.

Marae experience for me Liam Owen

This is my experience at the Marae i got there and it took a long time for the man to finish speaking. After that we did the hongi. And after that we went and had something to eat we were aloud a mini pie and cake or a sandwich and cake I had a mini pie and cake it was really yummy i loved it. After that we had a long 2 story's. After the 2 long story's we took a photo together. And then after that we left the Marae and it was so fun i'd love to go again.